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Friday 15 April 2016

Description of Ice cream sandwich

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Rich texture flowing through the white block. Soggy thin layers wrapped around it leaving space on the outside. Chunks of sweets gave it flavour and the fresh armour was to die for. Everyone’s eyes were glued to one thing. My first bite was a sensation, everything just melted away in my mouth.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Talofa Lava Heather,

I really like your first descriptive sentence and the words that you have used. I also had an ice-cream sandwich but did you enjoy yours? I know I did.

Keep it up!

Unknown said...

Talofa Lava Heather,

I really like your first descriptive sentence and the words that you have used. I also had an ice-cream sandwich but did you enjoy yours? I know I did.

Keep it up!

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