Having drugs to impress your friends
Is so disgusting it won't be a trend.
Abusing yourself with drugs
Only makes you a fool,
It shows you didn't listen at school.
If your are intoxicated
That won't help at all.
Remember that people are around
If you are feeling down.
You would never be given a crown
For doing drugs you'll forever be a clown.
7 comments:
Talofa lava Heather,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I liked your rhymes and I especially liked the 2 last sentences. Those were really cool. Well my poem is similar to yours as I did my poem about addictions too. Do you have an addiction?
Hello Heather
I love this Poem it would really help people with their addiction with Drugs. I did a Poem on Allergies I guess I would have rather had to write about Drugs and how I could help people out there.
Keep up the work Heather :D
Hi Heather
I thought your poem about addiction was extremely good. I liked how you use a lot of rhymes to make it sound interesting. Did you find it difficult trying to come up with rhymes for your poem?
Hi Heather
I thought your poem about addiction was extremely good. I liked how you use a lot of rhymes to make it sound interesting. Did you find it difficult trying to come up with rhymes for your poem?
Hello Heather
I really like your poem because it was really funny.I thought that your rhymes were really awesome.Your rhymes were really interesting.When you were finding rhymes was it hard to put it into a sentence.
Hello Heather
I really like your poem because it was really funny.I thought that your rhymes were really awesome.Your rhymes were really interesting.When you were finding rhymes was it hard to put it into a sentence.
Talofa lava Heather
I really like you poem i was impressed when you said
drugs Only makes you a fool,
It shows you didn't listen at school rhymes was hard but you made it look easy keep up the good work
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