Heather is a lumpy grey rock that holds onto rubbish flowing by.
Heather is a tall bulrush that sways from left to right in the breeze.
Heather is a stinky stench lingering through the bushes and into people's nose.
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wow.... Like your metaphor Poem! Liked how you use your name on the beginning of your sentences, also Love hoe you used some environmental words on your poem!
Kia Ora Heather I relly like how you used all of that descriptive writing. I also did the same task. The Omaru Creek smells so bad because of the water pollution and chemicals. How would a lumpy grey rock hold onto rubbish?
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wow....
Like your metaphor Poem! Liked how you use your name on the beginning of your sentences, also Love hoe you used some environmental words on your poem!
Kia Ora Heather
I relly like how you used all of that descriptive writing. I also did the same task. The Omaru Creek smells so bad because of the water pollution and chemicals. How would a lumpy grey rock hold onto rubbish?
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